Here is the answer to the question, what can I do?
Your essay is aligned with what G. K. Chesterton said, "Problems can only be solved by a Principle." (I'd add further, "therefore, it won't be solved by a non-principle.")
1. this essay looks like it is full of appeals to authority; lots of quotes by folks who may know what they are writing about.
2 God is in human terms inhuman.